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Darkness
Darkness overtaking me
Darkness swarming me
Darkness eating me
Darkness drowning me
Darkness filling me
Darkness breaking me
I stand in front of it as it makes its way to my insides
It takes hold, braking, snapping, and ripping me apart
Darkness so cold
Cold as ice, ever freezing me
Darkness blinding me
I can’t see were to go, how to brake free
Darkness holding me, killing me
Dark as black, black as night
Overtaking me, controlling me
I can’t break free, its blackness binding me
Darkness all around, no way to escape
Hope lost, despair taking its place
Falling to my knees, broken, wounded
Unable to scream, to yell for help
Darkness overtaking me
I see alight in the distance
A ray of hope
But as I run to it seems to get farther and farther away
The darkness begins to cover the light
Hope dwindling again
Spirit braking, shaking, and wavering.
Hope lost, Despair takes over again
Darkness covering everything
Falling to my knees again
Darkness taking me again
Darkness breaking me again
Darkness… everywhere
Dark as black, black as night
Ever binding me
Never ending darkness
Never ending fear
Never ending pain
Never ending chain
Torturing
Braking
Ripping me apart
Darkness overtaking
Darkness lurking
Never ending darkness
Dark as black, black as night
Drowning me in its blackness
Losing control over my body
Paralyzed by its blackness
Its blackness taking control
Trying to get free
Binding darkness,
Never setting me free
Never ending darkness
Swallowing me
Always dark
Dark as black, black as night.
By:
::Marius Indrei::
Darkness overtaking me
Darkness swarming me
Darkness eating me
Darkness drowning me
Darkness filling me
Darkness breaking me
I stand in front of it as it makes its way to my insides
It takes hold, braking, snapping, and ripping me apart
Darkness so cold
Cold as ice, ever freezing me
Darkness blinding me
I can’t see were to go, how to brake free
Darkness holding me, killing me
Dark as black, black as night
Overtaking me, controlling me
I can’t break free, its blackness binding me
Darkness all around, no way to escape
Hope lost, despair taking its place
Falling to my knees, broken, wounded
Unable to scream, to yell for help
Darkness overtaking me
I see alight in the distance
A ray of hope
But as I run to it seems to get farther and farther away
The darkness begins to cover the light
Hope dwindling again
Spirit braking, shaking, and wavering.
Hope lost, Despair takes over again
Darkness covering everything
Falling to my knees again
Darkness taking me again
Darkness breaking me again
Darkness… everywhere
Dark as black, black as night
Ever binding me
Never ending darkness
Never ending fear
Never ending pain
Never ending chain
Torturing
Braking
Ripping me apart
Darkness overtaking
Darkness lurking
Never ending darkness
Dark as black, black as night
Drowning me in its blackness
Losing control over my body
Paralyzed by its blackness
Its blackness taking control
Trying to get free
Binding darkness,
Never setting me free
Never ending darkness
Swallowing me
Always dark
Dark as black, black as night.
By:
::Marius Indrei::
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I can feel somehow a little bit what your poem says. It shows how darkness hits over and over again, until it becomes :
"Always dark
Dark as black, black as night"
This is the complete opposition to a poem where the poet wants it to flow. This is a hammering of dark feelings, of desperation. It is without hope, a fall to the dark side.
At each hit, it goes further deep inside. It is not quite my style, but I like it in a way.
"Always dark
Dark as black, black as night"
This is the complete opposition to a poem where the poet wants it to flow. This is a hammering of dark feelings, of desperation. It is without hope, a fall to the dark side.
At each hit, it goes further deep inside. It is not quite my style, but I like it in a way.